Wednesday, April 4, 2007
Pina Colada anyone?
I wanted to change one of my Wikipedia articles, but I couldn't decide what I wanted to switch to. So after sitting in my freezing cold room for a little while, I found myself wishing I were back in Southbeach in the beautiful 80 degree weather sipping on a pina colada. Therefore, I looked up the famous frozen drink on Wikipeida and decided to edit the article. Since the article is relatively short, there weren't many grammatical errors. However, I did clean up the introduction paragraph and rearranged some of the sentences. The article is not very detailed, so it leaves plenty of room for expansion in my future edits. Check out the article and read more about the pina colada if you love them too.
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